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The narrator has an emotional range from A to B and the story takes forever to go absolutely nowhere. There are far better listens available.
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Summary: Around her 18th birthday, Ariel finds out she’s a witch.
Content warning: a few mild curses
- The plots pretty slow moving. I get that there’s a lot of setup, but really, I could only think of 2 pts in the book that had any sort of action.
- Some of the bad guys’ motives seem weak.
- Ethan kind of seems along for the ride. He doesn’t add or detract much. Wish he’d done more as Ariel’s father.
- I wish Ariel had done more. She’s learning a lot, but it seems a lot of other things/people are protecting her. I want to see her become the in control witch ready to take on the forces of darkness.
What I didn’t like:
- A lot of the training scenes involved inane questions that seemed designed solely to move the conversation on so the other character could continue his/her lecture. For some reason, in the audio, that drove me nuts. (Really? I’m a witch? A book? Etc)
- Unresolved questions: - Why does Oren offer to help her if he’s just a collector? Who is the queen? What the heck happened to James? The queen shows up at the beginning and the end, but we’re specifically not told anything about her.
- Lack of closure in the end. There would have been better closure without the very last scene. We already know it’s book 1 and the story continues, but the last scene sort of stamps a “to be continued” sign on the story. I find those annoying.
What I liked:
- I enjoyed Ariel as a character. The tried and true girl-has-special-powers trope is always a fun one, and Ariel’s pretty likable.
- Oddly enough, I enjoyed the Vampire. He was a nice addition.
- I think the series as a whole has merit. There’s a lot of setup in this book.
- I loved the narrator’s voice for Dione. (British accents rock.)
Conclusion: It’s a slow start, but there’s a ton of potential for the series.