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The first third is well written with a spin off 'Twelfth Night.' But the whole middle is muddied by gushy overstated imaginations of romance, with overuse of the body's temperature, "heat rushed up my arm"... "heat exploded in my stomach"... heat here... heat there. Stop already! I had to turn it off. But after I cooled down, I realized the plot finally reached a turning point - it was probably going to start moving again. The last half continues with the adventurous climax we anticipated, but sadly the heroine's character is scared by the over-drama of the middle. The ending tries to take itself serious, but I wanted the heroine to have changed a bit more by the end.
The narrator was good, but the over dramatic emphasis on certain words started to be noticeable and exaggerated the moodiness of the heroine.
Not recommending it.
5 of 6 people found this review helpful
I did like this book however, I felt like the character went from a stone cold fighter to an over emotional teenage girl. By the end of the book there was someone crying in every chapter and it was usually the main character. It felt like the author was trying way to hard to make this book sappy by the end. I'm hoping there will be a little less of that in the next book.
4 of 5 people found this review helpful