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By Kenya on 07-08-16
should be in the smut section
Wasn't what I was expecting at all. The primary character tells you abut how tuff she is all the time but never dose anything to show it. And many times when a particular male character walks in the room she can't control her feelings and once she was like "my panties became wet". Really? This doesn't come close to the dialogue that goes on in my head during a high stress freakout. When people tell me that men think about sex more than women I think, "Must of been done by a man so he can doctor the results to save face." But for crying out loud no one fearing being discovered as a tooth fairy thinks about how moist her underpants got when the help she called for arrives. Maybe I'm missing something about just how good looking this guy was, or how magically good looking, but nothing came accost that way to me. Sure there is the glamour but she can resist it from other characters but for some reason can't from this guy, or just control herself at all. For a strong female lead she's pretty lousy. This story really should be in romance and I can't finish it. Its not what I thought it was going to be at all.
But don't count the reader out. Poor girl did great with what she had. She's the only reason I made it half way though.
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