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Emma and her snarky remarks are very much in this book as well. as our little AI grows she changes and get Still Remains the Same. it'll be interesting to see if they ever make it back to the original bunker she was found in to see if everything actually was destroyed or if anything is salvageable. but I digress because that's not what this book is about.
What did you love best about The District: A Futuristic Dungeon Core?
The ideas in this book are very original and very compelling. I loved listening to The District. I can't wait for the next books to be converted to audiobook.
Any additional comments?
Please Skyler get someone else to help edit your book or slow down in your writing speed a bit. The story is good, but there are so many plotholes that arise from missed details.
*Spoilers here, reader beware*
Here are two examples of missed details I remember. There was the time Emma remarks that she cannot increase Miss Gobble's intelligence, but she then immediately raises her intelligence (among other stats).. Or the time that Magpie was kidnapped, and about 5 minutes later Emma is talking to her again.
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