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Narration was average. But the plot was some of the most elementry story telling I have heard. The alien worlds were barely alien at all and even their god was a poorly renamed christian knock off with stolen bible verses and all. The characters names were hokey and laughable. Could not finish.
A good idea with lots of potential but so poorly written that it leaves the reader frustrated. The characters don't behave in believable ways, they refer to each other with first and last names even in personal conversations and the author seems to feel that it is mandatory to add descriptive words to every statement, the reader said with a frustrated tone.