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I'm hooked on this story; it's really engrossing, but the prose has some serious flaws. I find myself wanting to shout at the author at least every five minutes. Terrible repetitive word and phrase choices collide with constant, superfluous, and redundant individual clarifications. The same 6 adjectives and descriptors used over and over. The same overused superlatives on every page.
There's about 20 pages with of words that could just be cut without any need for replacement. Just unnecessary, additional words that would not be missed if they had just been deleted from the manuscript.
Dean Cadman, I love this series and I will happily beta-read your work for free because you tell a really good tale. If you don't take me up on my offer, please find a good editor. I want to keep going with this series, but it's getting harder and harder to stay in the story.
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This book started really slow! The first few chapters, dealing with his headache, and subsequent cure, was far too drawn out. While it added a dimension to the story, a couple of pages would have sufficed!
Additionally, the author had Lusam lamenting, and whining, etc., instead of taking charge and taking action. The first books were much better.
Then the ending was also anticlimactic, in my opinion.
2 of 2 people found this review helpful
Amazing book, interesting, full of action, can't wait for the fith! Highly recommended for fantasy lovers!
Next book please could not put any of these down until finished,brilliant,book ,brilliantly told ,As is all books so far. Not to be missed