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I really enjoyed listening these books. I can't wait until books three and four are available on audible as well.
12 of 12 people found this review helpful
I like the story line and character build in this story. Narration is also good. I would recommend this to others. Looking forward to book 3.
11 of 11 people found this review helpful
Eagerly anticipating the next instalment of this series. I especially like the multi angle approach to the story and kept me on the edge of my seat throughout. Would recommend to anyone.
2 of 2 people found this review helpful
What disappointed you about Lusam?
Really poorly written. Firstly, it is a garden variety "child with amazing powers that doesn't know his importance and living on the streets". Nothing new to see here.
The second is the sheer poor writing. Everything is spelt out as if they were writing for someone with a memory of a goldfish. Also, there is a huge amount of unnecessary repetition. Thoughts about a subject are then repeated verbatim when talking to another character. It happens in smaller ways. "The knife flew through the air and thudded into his chest. He looked at the knife that had thudded into his chest".
Needed a good editor to tighten up the writing.
Would you ever listen to anything by Dean Cadman again?
Unlikely, unless his writing skills improve considerably.
Which character – as performed by Alex Wyndham – was your favourite?
None really, they were all very one dimensional.
What character would you cut from Lusam?
I wouldn't cut them, just make them more believable.
7 of 9 people found this review helpful
I have really enjoyed this book unable to stop listening the narration is great too. I hope Dean keeps writing more stories - don't change please.
1 of 1 people found this review helpful
Written and read for a young audience perhaps? I found the narration very stilted and distraction.