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This selection could use more plot development. It is clear that the author knows how to weave a story together creating some memorable characters, but he needs an editor and a willingness to create one good book versus small serialized portions. Even with this short entry there is not enough action and character development to carry the plot along much less leave the reader hanging with a big cliffhanger at the end...actually not even a cliffhanger, just a to be continued mess at the end.
I grew to like a few of the characters, especially the main one. But, most of the characters were very generic and I could careless what happens to them.
The narrator is ok. I actually really like his voice, but he doesn’t have the versatility to carry all of the characters.
This could have been so much more. Many unique ideas and good premises, but the execution sucks.
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