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With powers he doesn't understand, Jim is called back to duty - as the ultimate warrior....
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By Ariadne Jones on 10-08-15
I thought that this would be a really great story but it was not! It was clunky and you almost didn't have to read it to find out what was coming as it was so bad!
Great narration but rubbish story
By Tachikoma on 09-23-15
So incredibly amateurish and nonsensical!
I loved the basis of the story, the dead soldier linked with a djinn and acting as super-soldier. Unfortunately the story makes little to no sense with massive jumps in logic that defy common sense (boyfriend hasn't arrived when he said he would and so has obviously been murdered and you're next) and people's opinions change all the time as well (he knows his wife is alive one moment and thinks her dead the next).
As for the narration, he has no skill in doing voices nor offering any impression of emotion and leaves the whole story blank and lifeless.
One to avoid unfortunately.