Fractured Spirit

Alpha World, Book 5

By: Daniel Schinhofen

Narrated by: Peter Berkrot

Length: 10 hrs and 58 mins

Publisher's summary

Fresh from the success of capturing Gwain’s Keep, Alpha Company is in high spirits. Flush with coin, everyone is eager to get better gear and see what new zones they can go fight in.

Not everything is roses though, as the first testing phase is about to come to an end. A number of those who ventured forth with the guild are about to return to their regular lives, and the next wave of testers brings even more players to embrace Alpha World as their new reality, if only for a limited time.

Alburet has new complications to deal with, but he doesn’t have to face them alone. Two other loving women - Fluffball and Karen - whom he has accepted the love of will be at his side as the revelation of his past comes out.

Will Alburet be able to handle what he has hidden from himself, with the love of the trio of women beside him? Or will he break and fail, leaving his spirit fractured?

©2018 Daniel Schinhofen (P)2018 Podium Publishing

Favorite series

I've listened to this series 4-5 times, as of writing this review, can't exactly single out why because it's all amazing. Of course there's parts that will make you frustrated, but what good story doesn't?

Fractured Spirit

Introduction:

Greetings, fellow beings of HowlStrom. I am Kiba Snowpaw, an alpha male Ice Wolf from our icy realm. With over 36 years of ice magic and a lifetime of gaming experience, I bring forth my review of "Fractured Spirit" from the Alpha World series. Let's delve into this tale, shall we?

Basic Plot Summary:

The story revolves around Alpha Company, a guild that has recently tasted victory by capturing Gwain's Keep. As they revel in their success and newfound wealth, they face the end of the first testing phase of the game. With new players entering Alpha World, the protagonist, Alburet, confronts personal challenges and revelations from his past. Supported by his loving partners, Fluffball and Karen, the story unfolds as Alburet grapples with his hidden traumas.

Analysis/Evaluation:

The narrative is a blend of LitRPG and romance, which might not resonate with everyone. While the gaming elements are intriguing, the heavy focus on relationships and emotions might deter some readers looking for pure LitRPG action.

Characters:

- Alburet: A complex character with a past that haunts him. His journey of self-discovery and acceptance is central to the story.

- Fluffball & Karen: Supportive and loving, they stand by Alburet, offering emotional strength. Their dynamics with Alburet add depth to the narrative.

Structure:

The story oscillates between the virtual world of Alpha and the emotional turmoils of the characters. While this offers a balanced narrative, the pacing might seem slow for those seeking action-packed sequences.

Impact:

The tale touches upon themes of love, acceptance, and confronting one's past. It serves as a reminder that even in a virtual world, one's emotions and traumas are very real.

Hook and Thesis:

The allure of "Fractured Spirit" lies in its exploration of human emotions within a gaming context. It delves deep into the psyche of its characters, making it more than just a typical LitRPG.

Praise and Critique:

The emotional depth and character development are commendable. However, the heavy emphasis on romance and feelings might not sit well with everyone. The RPG elements, though present, seem overshadowed at times.

Evaluation:

As an Ice Wolf who appreciates both battle and emotions, I found the story captivating. However, I yearn for a balance between action and emotions.

Comparison:

Compared to its predecessors, "Fractured Spirit" leans more towards emotional exploration than gaming. It's a departure from the series' roots, which might not be to everyone's liking.

Conclusion:

"Fractured Spirit" offers a deep dive into the emotional landscapes of its characters. While it might not resonate with hardcore LitRPG fans, those seeking a blend of emotions and gaming might find it appealing. As for me, Kiba Snowpaw, I appreciate the tale but hope for a more balanced narrative in future installments.

May the frosty winds of HowlStrom guide you. Until next time.

Disappointed

The author forgot they were writing a litRPG and instead focused on fantasy erotica. The characters were written even when fighting to discussions over sex or sexual activities. I am not a prude and am ok with some sex but the story was forgotten making me post this poor rating.

Not nearly as good as the rest of the series.

It does a lot of development of the narrative but it feels forced and like a lot was trimmed out to make it fit and even then, it felt as if it was dragging. Even the cliff hanger was only introduced near the end. I really hope that the next one will be better.

This one hit me in my heart bone the hardest.

This was the best book in the series yet. And that's saying something. Because they are all so good.

Rebound!

After the last book was slightly disappointing, the series has rebounded with possibly my favorite of the series so far.

still good

give the series a chance if you haven't already. The quality of the series stays consistent.

the past finally revealed?

No spoilers. Since book 1, I've been waiting to hear the real details of the protagonist. From what I can tell, it finally happens in this book. I'm pot committed at this point. I really enjoy Peter's (Narrator) performance. He doesn't seem to have as wide of a range as some other voice actors, but he is way better than many others. I can't wait to see how this series ends. c'mon book 6!

screw this roller coaster!

seriously, this book took you through a heck of an emotional roller coaster. GREAT book! Totally can't wait to get through the rest of the series!

good read!!!

Similar is the rest of his books continues with same characters and gets better and better