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As I said I love the story line and the excitement created with the sense of urgency. makes you want to read/listen faster! well created human characters and alien culture/ethos creation.
Also a great sense of the magical, endless beauty and hope that exists in all creation.
As story telling/writing, my only caviot is I feel the discriptive detail of human sexual interactions is too detailed and therefore, it takes away from the over all narative. Your writinf and story telling are Great, so much so that I can't but think you can share the fact of relations can be there without all that.
Thank you, and keep writing!
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I like the series but this book was 4x too long. The rubber band was stretched too far here. The up against impossible odds thing was every single paragraph. It fit old fast. Every story arc was entirely predictable.
It's a shame the next book is shaping up to be exactly the same.
This should have been an opening to the next book.
The Earth Rise series seems to mature over the first few books as the characters lose their innocence and fall into utter despair while battling insurmountable odds.
The writing improves consistently until it starts to delve into the realm of fantasy and all suspension of disbelief is lost. If like me, you like a little hard military scifi, some of the events in this book ruin the series.
Toward the end a formulaic pattern emerges and it seems this will continue in the next book.