How could the performance have been better?
Yes, while the individual characters are quite nice...the narration is horrible, nasal, and painful after a couple of hours of listening.
If you could play editor, what scene or scenes would you have cut from Descent into Darkness, Book 2?
Generally, if you could delete the entire inner monologue, this book would be more tolerable.
Any additional comments?
I agree with another reviewer, the storyline has some promise, but the characters feel like 8-year olds. By the end of the second book, you just feel that a third book would be a complete waste of a credit.