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This story is more like an outline that needs to be developed more. I'm hoping the plot , characters and world building are developed more in the next book.
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Amber is a rookie Elite officer who joined the force for a personal vendetta. She also has a secret, which she is not good at keeping. There are two males, Graham, her partner a former police officer and an Elite officer; Nick a hunter of paranormal beings. Each of the characters has their own agenda, which come together in the end.
Amber is a strong character,which becomes apparent as the story progress. There were lose threads left in the book. They are not crucial but they bugged me. How did she find her athame to use after the fire? How did she miss the connection with her visit with the fairy and her powers? Why did they take Christina as a conduit? Why was there a pentagram in Christina's room? What was the relationship with Christina mother and the vampire? Why is her (Amber's) magic different than her mother's? What accounts for the changes in vampires habits? What about the new zombies/non-zombies or whatever? How did Lilly get away from the demon? Her apartment, bedroom actually, has a raging fire and she can still find cloths in the closet?
It is for these unanswered questions that I did not rate it higher. But the book has enough merit that I will buy the next book. This really needs a better editor. If the second one is as bad, I will not read the third.