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repetition is good when practicing piano but not when writing a novel. the first half was agonizing to hear the female lead lamenting her lost "like." Not a love-- she didn't want to marry him. only at the end did the story move briskly enough to engage me, ending by getting tied up in a sad but tidy bow. I also thought the narrator made the male lead sound like a cardboard characterized cop with too much anger. just my two cents...
Started off so good. Then the ending was terrible. Think it must have been two different writers. Don't get me wrong it was the predictable ending just very poorly done