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There is such a thing as a well developed very short story. This isn't it. There is possibly a good idea here. However the world building is cut & paste and the story line jumps abruptly and seems to contradict itself. The romance and sex/erotica are major plot points but are all implied. There are also lots of editing & grammar issues. The narration wasn't horrible, but reading the mistakes as written didn't do anyone any favors.
Not worth a credit! Even on sale I don't think there is any point in spending $ on it
Unless you are REALLY into 'sort of' Cinderella stories where the M/M bear shifters can get pregnant [but don't] after very little plot or romance or sex or anything, but are finally rescued from 'the pit' which is actually a three story building named 'the rosebud'.
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I enjoyed this little story of discovery for a confused Omega. This is one of Noah Harris' short but sweet story.
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