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Love it however no more audio after this book very sad I would of love more of her!
This book was simply okay. It’s yet another tale of enemies falling in love and putting a paranormal, albeit, semi-effective twists near the end. To start, the narrator did an ok job. She did male voices ok, but sounds like a little nasally girl at times, especially when she did Alson, another female character. And she mispronounced “filleted”, like the past tense of filleting a fish. Instead, she pronounced it like “feel-it-ed,” and she needs serious work on her Jersey, Spanish, and Russian accents and sounding like a badass. I liked that Frankie, the h, and a werewolf, was strong mentally and physically. But the story started going downhill in the first sex scene where Jace, the H, tried the semi-dom role by telling Frankie not to cum until he says, to say she wants it, blah blah blah. And worst of all, the cum on demand order, which I never like. It seems too unrealistic even in a paranormal tale. Multiple orgasms I’ll buy as within the scope of human possibility, albeit very, very uncommon, but female orgasms on demand, especially with only intercourse, is too unbelievable to even conceive. I guess the whole idea of ordering someone to do something like that lacks appeal for me. Though it was good that the story was not full of sex—though I don’t think that’s necessarily a bad thing. There was 1 sex scene in the first half of the book, and 2-3 in the 2nd half of the book. Unfortunately, in spite of the lack of sex scenes, it seemed like every 15 minutes there was a statement about Jace being “hard”; it was so bad that he seemed like he needed to see somebody about it instead of it being sexy. Plus, too quickly, within 24 hours of knowing Jace, Frankie said she knew he was a good person. Really! You know that in less than 24 hours? I don’t think so. And she spoke of love after knowing him about a week. Also, some of the phrasing in the story didn’t work well. The author seemed to be ill-equipped for describing things. For example, it didn’t work when Frankie threatened to cut off a guy’s “balls” and feed them back to him “like scrambled eggs.” That imagery is hard to envision and doesn’t seem plausible even in the most dreadful of circumstances. Also, Frankie said her “brain was split” to describe being torn between two choices. Your mind might be split, but you are likely dead if your brain, a physical form, is split. And there were others. Finally, Frankie, as pack master, never seemed to know the rules guiding her pack. Multiple times, another pack member told her rules guiding the pack, and she seemed to be unaware of them. So it didn’t work for me.