The Light Within Me : Six Saviors

  • by Carly Fall
  • Narrated by Kevin Scollin
  • Series: Six Saviors
  • 7 hrs and 47 mins
  • Unabridged Audiobook

Publisher's Summary

When Abby and Noah meet, there is an explosive attraction between them that neither can deny… As a shy, awkward, social misfit, Abby has gone her whole life feeling as though she's different from everyone else and she simply doesn't fit in well with society as a whole. She longs to feel a real connection with someone, and she finally does when she meets Noah. Unbeknownst to Abby, Noah is from another world and his sole purpose is to hunt down the evil of his people that was unleashed on Earth hundreds of years ago. He's certain he isn't going to be able to return to his home, and anger and the need for revenge are his constant companions. His focus has been eradicating the evil and making them pay for taking his life on his world away from him. Noah tries desperately to fight his attraction to Abby so he can keep his focus on his mission. But when Abby gets dragged into the evil and mayhem from Noah's world, he realizes that maybe with Abby he can find a home here on Earth…if he can save her in time.


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Customer Reviews

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Could Have Been Great!

What I liked: I loved the premise of this story--unique and fun. Liked the hero. The author writes well, smooth and a good way with dialogue.

What I didn't like: Holy moly, can we just get to the story? For a 7 hour 47 minute book this background stuff took over 2 hours - boring. The beginning consisted of a few lines of action and dialogue and then chapters of background information about the hero and his people. I felt like I was reading a sci fi encyclopedia.

The same thing with the heroine. We finally meet her over 10% of the way into the story, get one brief half page of present day and then bam! into her past.

And that's where I almost gave it up. I hope the author will continue to use her great imagination and writing skills, then cut out all unnecessary stuff. There only 2 actual sex scenes in the whole book that were not very well written. Overall too much repeat information and not enough action spoiled the book for me.

The narrator was great with the delivery of the story.
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- Lia "I love all genres of books. However, when I listen to audio books as I clean, garden, drive they are better with a lot of heat!"

Disappointing, annoying and poorly written.

What an annoying book with basically no dialogue either. First of all this guy is from a different planet its called SR44 and I am here to tell you, you will NEVER forget that when reading this book. I actually did a word search for SR44 and on my kindle and got 116 hits. I swear I wanted to scream after a while when the narrator said SR44. The other annoying part is there was no dialogue to speak of.

The disappointing part is that you would think that a being from another planet would have some special powers, right? Wrong he did not. Basically the special power was that these warriors took the form of big hot hunky guys. Okay.. its a book they are always big hot and hunky. (before I get slammed for my review one of the warriors was a healer and one could see ghosts if they are in limbo) That's about it for special powers.. The hero in this book had zero powers or abilities. The other planet they were from didn't seem to be anything special from the descriptions.

Oh not to mention he had a wife on planet SR44 but never told Abby and of course at the HEA they married on earth. So he ends up with 2 wives, and yeah Abby still doesn't know.

Oh there's more... How was it up to Noah (our hero) to get Abby (our heroine) out of death limbo? We will never know the chapter ended and it was 2 weeks later. Which also happened quite often. 2 days later, 3 days later, 2 weeks later, 3 weeks later.... so much past tense writing.

I think this book was poorly written with no thoughts to bring it together. The concept could have been a great starting point to a great series but is ruined by poor writing.

Narration was pretty good but I did have to listen to it on 1.25 speed.

Credit worthy? NO not at all, save your credits time and money. Glad this book was free on amazon kindle and only 1.99 on audible.

I don't normally write such long reviews. But this one I just couldn't let go without explanation.
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- Tracy T "Audible Addict!"

Book Details

  • Release Date: 09-14-2013
  • Publisher: Carly Fall, LLC