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Great job by the narrator! I love his tone, I enjoyed him switching between accents. In my opinion, he used this was very helpful when imaging each character, and development of their personality. I would purchase another book read by this narrator..
book/ story: I agree with the feedback from other readers: it appears that the story is incomplete, needs additional editing and need additional development of the characters.
For example: when describing how long Julio knew Lissa in professionally (prior to their personal relationship), the sentence is cut off... in my opinion, these area is incomplete. We need to understand how the two meet and connected before they ended up in bed together.
Additionally, we don't really know what happened to when Julio confronted his assistant at the hotel? What happened to Tina, Mr. Ayers and Julio's assistant during Julio and Lissa presentation in Malian? They were all there, but??????? No explanation or development of that part of the story either for what was going on?
In addition to purchasing the Audio book, I also purchased the electronic book to see if I may have missed parts of the story that may have been developed, but discovered that the book has the same issues.
Regardless of my review, I would like to thank Ms. M. Caldwell, for taking the time to write the story. And I will be looking forward to reading Joan's story.
It's easy for readers to criticize the story but it takes courage to write one! Happy New Year to all.
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Although I enjoyed the story, it could've went lasted a bit longer. But over all it's a good book.
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