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What was most disappointing about Gwynne Forster’s story?
The story moved forward so slowly that it seemed like it wasn't going anywhere at times. <br/>I enjoyed Beyond Desire extremely, but it is hard to believe that the same author wrote this book. <br/>At times it seems like the story has potential, but it is just so horribly slow.
What do you think the narrator could have done better?
I think there was too much time spent dealing with the inner turmoil of the main characters. The characters were so wrapped up in themselves that it made it impossible for the story to move forward efficiently.
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The Author made telling a person about character Naomi's child seem top secret. I felt like the chapters just repeated themselves with slight changes. How many ways can Naomi deni herself love thinking Rufus would not understand. ... Just tell him already jeezzzz. Chapter after chapter Rufus gets mad at her, but then plants a kiss on her & parts her lips, just to walk away. This book feels like like a never ending Ferris wheel ride.