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This story started out decent then seemed to go all awry.
I liked Royal and Lily as a couple. They had good chemistry and it felt genuine, not forced so that is good.
To many things going on that should have not been there, made the story irritating. Why did there have to be so many more characters and elements added after about 30%. It started to get confusing and did not flow very well.
As for the narration it was okay at best. The narrator needs to work on her men's voices.
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this story quickly became boring. the story felt very forced. the hero was not heroic. the herion was a good character, the uncle was a good character but, it come together well. the narrator was not convincing as male.