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The story needed more background to truly buy into the events. I listen to a lot of audiobooks. I like romantic intrigue and suspense. I had a difficult time believing that these characters had the intense feelings that were purported.
As for the narrator, there weren’t pauses between point of views. He would be narrating from the male’s POV and without a pause would switch to the female. I had to rewind a few times to get back into the story.
It’s a decent plot that, with a rewrite, could be more believable and sellable.