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The author handled the multiple stories/characters very well. While the sex scenes are hot, the character development is poor. Xander could have been a great character but he has such little development...from bad guy to saving African children in the blink of an eye. The wordy writing was that of an elementary school teacher. It felt as if the author was just talking down to the reader. I expected better from Cooper. What a waste of potential.
4 of 5 people found this review helpful
cant finish the 2nd chapter. the story didnt grab at me and the narrator had such a whiny voice its impossible to focus. wish i didnt spend the money
1 of 1 people found this review helpful
narater was a massive let down. made no effert to try to do a male voice and tried to hard on the female voice over done and undergone I was dizzy shame as the story line was awesome.