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This book wasn’t for you, but who do you think might enjoy it more?
I'm not sure who was the intended audience. The situations were adult, but the writing was extremely sophmoric
What could Niki Jilvontae have done to make this a more enjoyable book for you?
The author could provide structure, character and plot development, continuity, and engage a team that supports her craft by providing editing, proofing and beta-testing prior to publishing. While the riding was extremely sophomoric, the grammatical errors were evident even with the audio. The narrator did her job which was to read what was provided. The content editor for the audio release missed some key things. Full sentences were often repeated and a time or two complete passages.
How could the performance have been better?
I've experienced Cee Scott's earlier work. She has improved greatly. The distracting flaws surrounded the audio quality
What reaction did this book spark in you? Anger, sadness, disappointment?
Disappointment that the potential was missed by a 100 miles. A good man destroyed by a deeply flawed jezebel could have actually been a fantastic book.
Any additional comments?
I purchased book on sale $1.99. Book 2 I purchased for $10. I'll be returning both immediately not because of the sophmoric wirting, but because the audio quality was not worth the price.
1 of 1 people found this review helpful
The story is priceless it's a everyday or anybody story cuz these things do happen in the real world and it reminds me as a reader I'm not alone or the only one that can relate cuz there is a lot of women who could relate to this story good job!!!!