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I am not a harsh critic so for me to ask for a refund and give 1 star is unusual. This could have been a great story. How can a story about a woman having two sexy brothers in her bed not be ! Well ask your 80 year old English teacher to write a sex scene and this is the result. I cringed at some of the descriptions : definitely not hot just embarrassing. An over use of the English dictionary in an attempt to make a bad writer seem more plausible. Sadly it doesn't detract from the poor flow and the disjointed dialogue; it is merely sad and incredibly annoying. Hot bits : only if you are a virgin and have a rubbish imagination. Seriously this book has made me think perhaps even I should give writing a try. My advice : do not waste your time or your money.
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