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Liked the hero, exciting fight at the climax of the story between the hero and his opponent who was a very bad guy, good HEA and ending
Heroine has a real chip on her shoulders throughout most of the story. The fat comments by adults were juvenile at best and offensive at worst. The heroine has lost 80 pounds, works out every day and is in fantastic shape, so because she is size 12, she is considered a pity date by one and a piggy by others? Give me a break. Really? Is this the world we live in today? Beauty comes in all shapes and sizes. Healthy is beautiful. Also, the bad guy kidnaps the heroine not once, but twice, and no one ever presses charges against him? Maybe the author should consider writing fantasy where the reality check can be left at the door. Narrator was only OK, not able to differentiate between characters much. Except the bad guy, he spoke with a southern accent. Finally, the story was done before. The opponent uses the hero’s girlfriend against him in an effort to win the upcoming fight. Nothing new here, but it makes the meat of the story more important which fell short for me.
In spite of all my cons, the author knows how to use a pen. Will I continue with this series? Not sure, but I will not be opposed to trying this author in the future if the story description captures my attention.
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A lovely, love story and although Dante a fighter with alpha male tendencies I'd have said he was smitten, his journey falling in love and showing her was easy/gentle.
Narrator was a bit breathy/whiney and put a feeble spin into the story from a female perspective -insecurity does not equal feeble, therefore I struggled with listening.
Some contradictions in the story. Initially, it was about being healthy and fit, not about weight loss; The story pushed this mind set and right at the end the author said about her very successful weight loss programs (I didn't think it was about weight loss I thought it was about accepting yourself and living a healthy life.) so that one sentence made me sigh, a small oversight in the grand scheme of things.