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While nowhere near her best work, this story might have been OK but it was ruined by terrible narration. Actually it doesn't qualify as narration but rather a reading that lacked fluency, tone, mispronounced countless words and didn't even attempt characterisation
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L.A. Witt managed to pack quite a bit of emotion, angst and hot sex into this quick story.The story is told in alternating view points with flashbacks to their initial relationship. I felt Chris forgave far too easily.
This story has the same issues that I have with a lot of Witt's stories and that's arguments repeating themselves: characters bringing up the same points two or three or more times, no one really hearing it, and then everything just kind of works itself out somehow. I don't really want to read the same argument over and over again. This could've easily been five pages shorter if those had been cut out or lessened.
The ending felt rushed, unexplained. I wanted to know what happens going forward, how things panned out but it just stopped.