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3 out of 5 stars
By
TR
on
11-26-15
ok story good narration
I liked Brinley and Jason. I loved that Jason could sing...lol. I appreciated the fact that they didn't do stupid shit. They didn't have all that angst stuff either. I liked that Brinley put all her issues out there for Jason to see. While Jason had his own issues he laid them out even though he still had to deal with them. The suspense part was good. I did feel as if I missed something. The other two guys on Jason's team had stories and the way they and their families were mentioned made me feel like this wasn't book 1 of the series.
Liked the story and would totally read West's story if it comes.
story - 2.75
narrator 3.25
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2 out of 5 stars
By
Trish R.
on
05-11-16
Barely OK for me..
At least 5 different reviewers said one thing or another about “hot sex,” and they are so wrong, as far as I’m concerned. At 36%, page 101, Jason and Brinley had been with each other since almost the very first page and there hasn’t been even a thought of a kiss, much less any kind of desire. At 38% the word arousal was used and then they had sex. How boring is that?
I did manage to finish the book. After they had sex there were still no thoughts of wanting or desire then they had sex again. It was ridiculous and I can’t see myself reading this author again.
AND it was so obvious who the bad guy was from the beginning. There were a few suspects but he stuck out like a sore thumb.
I did like Jason’s friends, Logan and Jared, and I liked his brothers, West and Travis and his parents, Peter and Marie. Nice friends and family but a really boring hero and heroine. I have no idea why they fell in love, the author showed no chemistry between the two at all. Telling each other about your family and all your secrets does mean you’ll fall in love but that’s what this author wants you to believe.
There was sex and swearing and the F-bomb was used 18 times.
As to the narrator: Lance Greenfield was just ok. The females spoke with little too much masculinity and he reads without emotion. He neither laughed nor whispered when the book called for it.
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