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The writing is immature. The narrator needs to work on her profession. An accent that matches the area doesn't bother me but mispronounced words do when they're not in a quote. There were about three times she mispronounced the same word. It wasn't in a quote so it was her own mispronunciation. She also cleared her throat once which wasn't part of the script. That should have been cut.
It was a really good story. And i really liked it. But damn that was a bad recording. It sounded like the narrator was sitting in a small box. It kept skipping back with alot of the . It really messes with the whole experience.