Breathless

Jesse, Book 1

By: Eve Carter

Narrated by: Adam Conner, Madison Vance

Length: 5 hrs and 47 mins

Publisher's summary

Bad boy professional motocross rider Jesse Morrison knows how to leave an impression. Except lately, it has mostly been bad impressions. Frustrated and wounded, he surrounds himself with women, booze, and drugs. After getting kicked out of his brother's house, he relocates to California for the summer to crash at his uncle's place.

In Santa Monica, Jesse meets the one woman who can lead him back on the right path: beautiful 22-year-old, Niki Milani. Only one problem: She is not interested. Niki has her own demons to fight. A past that left her emotionally abandoned by her own blood, her father. She keeps her heart guarded and finds it difficult to trust a man again. Especially not a bad-boy player who is more messed up than she. However, Jesse never backs down from a challenge. Armed with a sizzling attraction, he is determined to prove to Niki that there is more to him than what appears on the surface. That he is the one who can heal her heart. This book contains adult situations and explicit content.

©2013 Carter Publishing House (P)2014 Eve Carter Audio Books

Great series

One of my favorites. Loved whole series. Want more from this author. Like this genre.

Awesome book

I enjoyed the depth of characters in this book. The story was good, and I always love when they have have 2 readers for male and female leads.

Where is book two?

Why can't I find book two as an audible? I want to listen to it.

Don't hold your breath not that good

Story very weak. Girl narrator sounds like a child. Not good for this story line. Not worth a credit and save your money.

Dawn's Review of Breathless: Jesse, Book 1

This one was OK for me. The story was a good one, but I think that the characters could've been written a little better.

awesome

loved it. can wait to read book 2. looking forward for more. great story, quite different.

nothing and nowhere.

Boring. Struggled not to stop the whole time. I kept thinking it would start a storyline somewhere. There was next to nothing and the story went nowhere. Not one answer to any question, and then one mildly interesting thing and BAM cliffhanger. Buy the next book please. Not after this display of non imaginative writing. Use an outline. PLAN a story before you write. I would write about the story but literally there is so little to tell. The summary is the entirety of the story. Horrible.

Not the worst, but....

...not great either. The main heroine comes across as very immature and unreasonably skittish. The way she’s written also seems very hypocritical. In one moment she can’t stand being with someone who’s a boring, rule abiding, analytical, stuffed shirt kind of guy, but in the next moment she freaks out about someone who steps up and defends the people he cares about, thinking him “crazy” and “psychotic” even though he’s not actively looking for violence, but is just being a protector when the need arises. She seems very wishy-washy and hard to relate to.

Not good

I rarely write bad reviews, but this one has so many annoying qualities, from the female narrator sounding like a 15 year old girl and mispronouncing so many words, really did she pay attention in English class at all? The heroine was so whiny, weak and fearful I just wanted her to go away. I truly don't get the high reviews on this one. Don't waste your credit or money.

Horrible

I couldn't finish this book. The main character is an idiot and sadly there was a lot of repetitive descriptions. I tried to go back to listen but just couldn't finish.