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What would have made The Potential better?
A better story line, better ending, better editor, character development, a shorter version of it...... the list goes on.
What was most disappointing about June Bretherton’s story?
The whole thing. Dragged throughout the story. It seemed that the author was getting paid by the word. Then finally in the last two chapters..... the ending was totally stupid and she laid no groundwork for it. Shallow characters too. The author just repeated herself for 22 chapters. Stilted dialogue as well.
What do you think the narrator could have done better?
The narrator was not bad. But the recording of it, allowed the reading to hear every breath he took. Distracting.
What character would you cut from The Potential?
Hard to decide.