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Great story overall.
There are some jumps in the the thought process that don't connect.
If the author wants to explain a term or technology, don't do it by making a character who by job should already know it, ask what it is. In the opening submarine sequence it would seem none of the lower grade sailors know even the basics.
The narrator cannot do accents, but tries on every opportunity. My poodle does better French.
Perhaps I am a little critical, but I'm quite sure that the FBI wouldn't permit an agent to return to active duty suffering from the degree of PTSD Jana was suffering .
Also, it was a little slow in some areas.
The narrative was excellent.