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very good story, well done... well I could do without the chimes. really. so jarring.
the story is fine, the writer is getting better but the dialogue is still awkward. the programmer is terrible, she has improved some but does things like record a hard name in a robotic voice and input it whenever it's used so it's always out of place and sounds like a telephone robot asking for the agent after talking for a while in another voice. OH and the bells, for goodness sake the bells have to go... half the sound bite would work but it's also distorted. less lines are repeated this time around but it seems she has not taken the time to learn to pronounce any of the name from other known languages like Gallic. . . I would really like for a good editor to edit the book and the book them re recorded but it's not in the cards. this is the last available, I don't know if any more will shoot but while I will get them if I see them I likely won't search for them...