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What disappointed you about Murder at Manassas?
The main character was neither intelligent nor particularly admirable. The storyline had promise, but the use of Booth in the story seemed contrived and the "twist" at the end was, imo, stupid. Either the main character was stupid regarding ballistics (and trajectories of bullets) or he was stupid in believing the tale provided him at the end. The "mother was a slave" scenario was equally contrived. None of the women seemed particularly intelligent, enterprising or even self sufficient.
What could Michael Kilian have done to make this a more enjoyable book for you?
Drop Booth or make him more of an opponent. Have the women be a bit more intelligent, truly enterprising and less inclined to hysterics and dosing themselves with laudanum. The main character drinks too much and is apparently unable to think rationally about any human with two X chromosomes. Being "gallant" is one thing. Stupid is another.
Did the narration match the pace of the story?
yes. Narration was acceptable.
What character would you cut from Murder at Manassas?
Booth or one of the two actresses in love with Booth.
Any additional comments?
The series has potential, but the protagonist was flatly annoying. He remains "neutral" until the end and really seems to join the Union only because he's compelled to. Bleah.