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By Robert Brewer on 02-23-18
This story doesn't have an ending
"That thing-a-ma-jing is critical for this adventure. Oh no I'll be looking for that thing-a-ma-jing for a long time." Thing-a-ma-jing falls from sky and lands at his feet.
No struggle. It just goes on through a few easy adventures where there is no challenge for our protagonist. Each of his challenges ends with no struggle or lesson learned. Most of the time the conflicts are introduced in one paragraph, then in the next they solved by the answer literally falling from the sky.
To top it off the story doesn't even have an ending.