Regular price: $24.95
Buy Now with 1 Credit
Buy Now for $24.95
Let me start by saying that I did finish this book and I will probably check out the sequel. That is not necessarily a sign of a well written book though, as I did slog through all those popular vampire stories too.
This book could have been very good, not great but a fun imaginitive adventure if it had been proofread prior to publication. The premise is fun but the writing feels unfinished with unnecessary conversations that drag inteminably plus a huge inconsistency in the hero's intelligence from page to page. Nobody who has the conversations and uses the vocabulary that Bran does could be believed to be that dense. The supporting characters are a bit better but several of the more important ones lack development and fail to be likable. The bumbling stupidity shown by most of the adults in the story fails to be funny and silly as it should be and is, actually, a bit insulting. It feels as though someone who writes quite well for adults has tried to create a children's book by taking very young books and adult novels and running them through a blender. Kids are not all stupid and want as much an anybody to read intelligently. I still have high hopes for the author as the story is quite fun and the monsters and suspense are well done.
The narration also leaves a bit to be desired. Mr. Thompson does a lovely job with most of the characters and even manages to make some of the dialogue believable but he could use a bit of work on the women's voices. Most of the female voices are shrill and vapid and although the women are written to be more intelligent then the male characters, they come across as a bit too saccharine.
In spite of my criticism, I did actually enjoy the story and I hope Mr. Nation takes a few more creative writing classes and tries again. Maybe if the author had a higher opinion of his readers' intelligence he would stop dumbing down his characters and write a really fun adventure story that everyone could enjoy.
2 of 2 people found this review helpful
Where do these books come from? Did someone run it past an editor?
While this is a childrens book, it starts off like an adult book with a rather cold blooded murder. Then continues as if written to 5 or 6 year olds with adult characters behaving childishly, interminable pointless dialog and dragging out a story line beyond endurance. I couldn't get past Part 1, skipped to Part 3 and managed to endure to the end. Two of my children listened to parts of this story and told me it wasn't very well written. One of my children who started the story with me, asked me to please put on another book because this one was painful to listen to.
The narrator was actually good, but I don't know how he managed to stay with this book.
4 of 6 people found this review helpful