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The main character in this book has no redeeming characteristics. Nor do any of the rest of the well under developed characters. Not a fan.
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What would have made While I Was Gone better?
Let's see...character development, an actual plot or purpose for the story.
How did the narrator detract from the book?
The narrator was ok. I think she did the best she could with the material. She seemed like she was looking through a window at the characters though, instead of being a character. This is probably because of the poor character development to begin with.
If you could play editor, what scene or scenes would you have cut from While I Was Gone?
I'd have redone everything.
Any additional comments?
The main character was ridiculous. I just didn't connect with her or even like her from the beginning. By the end of this long drawn out pile of garble, I was ready for her husband to just leave her and the book to end. I almost didn't finish it.
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