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What disappointed you about Sand?
I can hardly believe this book was written by the same writer of Wool-Shift-Dust. Although the general idea was original to begin with, it was badly written, very unclear explanations, cheap sentiment, too many words, pure fill-up.
What was most disappointing about Hugh Howey’s story?
All the false sentiment was horrible. Also chaotic explanations and long-winded.
What do you think the narrator could have done better?
I am only a reader, not a writer so I cannot say.
If you could play editor, what scene or scenes would you have cut from Sand?
All the scenes with the mother and the happy-clappy family nonsense.
6 of 6 people found this review helpful
it was building up to be a good story but then suddenly stopped. what happened????
1 of 1 people found this review helpful