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This was the most jankety book I ever read...who stays with a man and has sex with him after he tells you he's had HIV for years and didnt tell you?! Inconceivable! I'm glad I got this on credit good grief! The whole plot was just ashy, dusty and hood boogerish 😐
The narration was flawed. the narrator needed to enunciate. sentences were repeated 3 or 4 tiimes.
how is it that hiv was not a concern? how did carry not have it if she's been sleeping with Todd since high school, but that's had it.
the "other kids "were ciara's nieces and nephews. yet she referred to them so callously.
ciara was 5 months pregnant when the gun fight started, but was full term by the end of it.
this book needed structure, research, character and plot development, as well as a editing team before publishing.