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This is a great story and keeps you listening, but it needs a more wordy author. It reminds me of the old TV show, Dragnet. Just the facts, mam, and nothing but the facts. The naration is too fast and monotoned. I would love to see this rewritten with dialogue and emotion. There is none of that. However, I don't regret the time spent listening, because, like I said, it is a wonderful haunted house story.
The author had a story in mind, but it was executed poorly. This wasn't scary, it was funny. I found myself laughing out loud at how bad it was. The writing sounded like a high school creative writing project. I also found the narration distracting. The narrator didn't seem to have a good sense of cadence or intonation. He read this horror story with a cheery, uplifting tone. Something about it just felt off, and it distracted me throughout the whole story.