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I am all for a first timer, haha that sounds naughty and it isn’t. Ok it is but its allowed with these stories right?
I don’t know what to say about Allen and Bill other than read this short it’s sweet and hopeful. I really like how Allen was the shy one and Bill took charge but in all the right ways he didn’t push Allen but he helped guide him.
I love stories like this one, can you tell. =;-)
I like the deep tone the narrator used the best, he really brought Bill to life for me.
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I enjoyed this story. The two main characters needed to be fleshed out a bit more, but were both likable. Narrator did well distinguishing the different characters, but was slow and a bit flat. I think the narration took away some from my over all enjoyment of the story. Sex scenes were good, but not what I would consider to be "erotic". Actually, they were very tame, but not unpleasant. A pretty traditional and tame "first time" story. This book had a lot of potential and I think that with some tweaking of the narration, some more detail to the characters and a substantial plot it could be much more. The over all plot was weak and non-climactic. I will read/listen to another book by this author and the narrator in future books. Both have a lot of potential and I'd like to see how they do in future stories/ narration. I don't believe the author or the narrator should be given up on at this point. I'm looking forward to seeing how both will do in the future.
I received this book for free in exchange for a honest review.