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By Katherine on 05-09-16
Junior high level story
I like the whole idea of a story, but sooo much is lacking. Lawrence and Alonzo are hard to keep separate as the names are too similar. Not enough character development is done. The narrator, who is pleasant to listen to, doesn't have breaks In Between the chapters or scenes. . I finally quit listening to this choppy story when I could not visualize it anymore. I hope that the author would revisit this story with some depth and a good writing teacher. This story was like one long run-on sentence.
By Kindle Customer on 02-08-16
This book wasn’t for you, but who do you think might enjoy it more?
I can't think of anyone who would enjoy this book. It wasn't well written and it didn't really fit in with any of the categories.
Would you ever listen to anything by Traci Tyne Hilton again?
What character would you cut from Foreclosed?
All of them.