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Sometimes, our -- the readers', experience with shorts and novellas is fairly tepid. Too often, these shorter stories have the feel of being part of something longer, with pieces missing. These pieces might be a broader story arc where the short or novella are really chapters or an experimental partial story line. -- I'm sure I could have said that more succinctly, but wasn't feelin' it.... ANYWAY, this was a complete storyline. It had good pacing. It had good time-differentiation. It even had one or more well-placed, sizzling scenes. Well done.
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The story was formulaic of course. It is to be expected given the HEA genre. But it was sweet. What made it truly enjoyable however was the dialogue, particularly that between Lucy and Kristen. Which makes it doubly disappointing that the narration was so stilted and unemotional. I don't know if it is miserliness on the part of the producers or simply a case of limited labor markets but it is frustrating to the point of infuriating that these folks can't see the impact of bad narration on a good story.
Or maybe they just don't give a damn.
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