Violated by Monsters: The Fiend Fog

By: Hannah Wilde

Narrated by: Hannah Wilde

Length: 25 mins

Publisher's summary

Sarah is a sexy goth, and practicing Wiccan, she spends her days working in the local spell store at the mall. Other than that, however, she's a typical college girl who still pines away after the hottest guy on campus.

When Sarah finds an ancient book of love spells, she thinks that it might be her only chance to hook up with the guy of her dreams. But when the spell backfires and the entire mall falls under a mysterious purple mist, Sarah finds herself in more trouble than she can handle.

Soon, people start venturing out into the strange fog, never to return. Sarah makes a trek of her own, quickly discovering that the shadows in the mist are horny fiends who defy explanation and crave hardcore gangbangs!

©2014 Hannah Wilde (P)2015 Hannah Wilde

decent setup, tiresome sex scene

This one was kind of a disappointment. It starts off decent enough, though it feels a little rushed and doesn't really fully explore the possibility of a mysterious fog full of demons. Then we get to the sex scene, and it's pretty dull. It's just the same old tiresome description of people doing stuff to each other, like a transcript of a porno. This might be alright if you've never read a sex scene before, but it gets old real fast.
What I can't get over is the wasted opportunity inherent in a swirling purple mist - hell, just a porno parody of Stephen King's The Mist would have been more creative.