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I've purchased other Daddy stories by Alex Anders, so I purchased this one hoping that these two stories would be about the same. But I was very, very wrong. And the narrator for these two stories is bad. This author is unable to write erotica as vibrantly as Anders. Her stories and the descriptions are so lacking. I think many authors think it's easier to write short stories. But I think it's harder to write a satisfying short story. Every word really counts. This author was unable to provide a satisfying, short read. And this author tried to address more serious aspects of step-daughter/step-dad sex, which is not bad. But she didn't accomplish any degree of insight or seriousness on this issue. The author had the dad character use the power dynamic between the characters to get what he wanted. I think she crossed the line when she had the dad had step-daughter do something b/c he was her "father" while also having sex with her. A line was also crossed when the author had the dad character view their sexual encounter as a sign of love. These types of relationships are already taboo. But this author doesn't seem to know how to navigate the nature of a taboo subject within certain lines. Instead, she causes confusion and conflict and makes it more taboo and, as a result, considerably less realistic and desirable. And the narrator's reading was too fast and bland. She might as well have been reading a cereal box. Her voice is too high when voicing the female characters; she consistently sounded like a whining, childish, too-young brat. I won't be purchasing other stories by this author and will avoid this narrator in the future.
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Well written and Read about a daughter wanting her Step Father to be her first. Beautiful story begins with her in the shower satisfying herself while thinking of him. Suddenly the phone rings and he needs her to babysit. Yes, my two fantasies at once.
Anyone who reads my reviews knows I never give away the ending so you'll need to buy it to find out. However you should know that it contains adult language and acts very well described. If you have a credit you won't be sorry you used it on this story. The lady that narrates the story is excellent hitting the "Highs" & "Lows" perfect and even the exciting stuff is on the money. I gave it 5 stars as I felt like I was there in the story so be careful if your driving and listening.