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The story, naturally, focuses around sex. Though the story implies that there will be some sort of ménage a trios, a f/m/m tryst, and that really never happens. Though there is a very, very small bit of m/m on action, brief, non-detailed oral and hand session, but not worth buying for that. It amounts to little of nothing. And the f/m sex was nothing special either; it didn’t seem to even rise to the level of erotica. The narrator tried to spice the story up through his sound effects and dragging on every, every, every word almost, which wears thin soon. But the narrator’s attempt didn’t help the lacking story. And the story had some confusing parts as a result of inconsistencies. Even in fantasies, that’s bothersome. Also, it would’ve been great if the author was able to have her characters move beyond the exclamation of “f***.” I agree that it has multiple uses beyond a verb. But it was so tiresomely overused in this brief tale. I’m done with this author. There’s nothing special at all and not even worth $4.86. Apparently there’s a reason why I never bought this author’s tales before. I should’ve stayed with that option.
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