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This book wasn’t for you, but who do you think might enjoy it more?
I don't know who would enjoy this book. It is very boring and clinical. Not at all erotic. You never get to feel what the characters feel, their pain and pleasure, humiliation. Not at all like the Story of O.
Has The Slave Factory turned you off from other books in this genre?
How did the narrator detract from the book?
Narrator is awful, reads very fast, no emotion.
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What disappointed you about The Slave Factory?
The premise is a good one, but the writer tried to do to much with too many characters in too short a novel. Because of this it lacked depth of experience for the characters as they went through their training and sales. Sadly it happens often and you end up with shallow plots, or shallow characters, or both. And this one hits both sadly.
Has The Slave Factory put you off other books in this genre?
Audible should DUMP this question. A bad book does not equal a bad genre and only a fool would be put off from a whole genre by one poor book. Heck, even a good writer can write a bad book while writing many good ones.
If you could play editor, what scene or scenes would you have cut from The Slave Factory?
I would have cut the majority of the characters from having major story lines, and instead worked with one or two of them and told the other characters tales when they interacted with the chosen main characters. Note the marketplace series first book wasn't the best for me because of too many characters, most of them poor ones and only improved when the main focus was on only a bare few, and those books are far longer and allow for more depth.
This book skipped right over the experience of pain play introduction and honestly over just about every aspect of what It means to be a slave and submission. So cut most of it to allow more depth. Hope author learnt it for the other books in series, but I doubt it.
With humour and 'tasteful' detail!😀 A great read with something for everyone
PLEASE put all other Titles onto Audible! :-)