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There are 5 stories in this bad compilation. Of the 5, all have females being forced into sex, and they are being forced into sex with human ghosts in 2 of the stories, aliens in 2 other stories, and a humanoid, earth-based entity that blurred in 1 story.
The writing was very, very immature. None of the stories varied in their lack of good English usage or good syntax. At times it sounded like it was written by someone who didn't know English well, as if English may have been their second language. Being creative and being able to express it through writing are two different skills. These authors only had one, and it's not the writing.
And all of the stories had one mechanical, non-descriptive, non-sexy sexual encounter. There was redundancy in all of the sex; all had oral, anal, and vaginal. All of the anal sex was deemed painful and done for the first time by the female protagonists.
The narrator didn't help my experience with these stories. She was not good either, but contributed to the blandness of this compilation. The narrator's pausing, spacing between words strangely and over emphasizing "a" like someone just learning to read was irritating, distracting, and evidenced a lack of skill at narration. Her poor work made me wonder whether or not it was bad writing every time or bad reading/narrating at times. For instance, in 1 story she said, "Box of dark work" instead of "Box of dark wood." And in another story, similarly, she said, "Growing even faster" instead of "Going even faster" following a statement about oral penis movement. Were these errors in the narrator's reading or errors in the writing? Nonetheless, the ideas were good but so poorly executed. There's nothing else positive in any of these beyond the simple ideas. Immature, bland, poorly executed in writing and narration.