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• decent plot
• entertaining enough
• lack of character development
• the "big reveal" by chrissy is treated/written callously.
• maceo's character unfortunately wasn't used as a way to show how not to react to react to this type of “reveal”. The character treated her secret as worse than his countless acts of cheating…sad
• the story stopped which what could only be the intro and lead into the body of the story and then left with the reader with a cliffhanger.
• this author is setting a negative precedent by choosing to give you a piece of a story rather than making sure that each book in the series can stand alone
the use of “second father” instead of “stepfather” . why? Maybe it’s a regional thing.