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Talia was 18 and the usual young female type in romance and erotica tales. She's described in common ways too with a "heart-shaped face" and rounded hips. She had some body issues not being what she called "slim," though she admits that she wasn't "fat" or "overweight." So this story sends a great message that women should be self-conscious about their body if they don't meet a certain standard. Sigh. Also common among romance novels, Talia is "inexperienced." There is a bit of world-building in the tale, but not a lot. In the background, we learn about struggles and battles with very little detail.
There was one developed planet in Talia's universe. She grew up on a poor, undeveloped planet in a poor family of miners with few options. Her dad signed her up to be chosen for the leisure suite on earth. She'd been chosen as an escort which benefitted her family. She didn't want to return to her old fashioned home planet that was unnamed. She believed her position gave her a better chance for a good life, one that was to be found if she, and others like her, convinced a man to provide her with security in exchange for access to her body at his will. So her mentor, Ginelle, a high-achieving escort, instructed Talia not to romanticize and to focus solely on "seeking donations."
Men were considered easily manipulated & all the same as takers. Women just wanted men to like them & give them material items. And men just wanted to be studs. So a stereotypical view of both men & women was common during the 1st half of the book.
While "seeking donations," without any disease protection at any time, Talia met Marshall, a commander, and Desh or Dash, a 28-yr-old combatant (aka fighter/gladiator). Talia tried to become Earth's next "Pretty Woman." That included finally having an orgasm during sex. I won't tell you how or with whom. Talia was too needy, wanting more than anything, at first, to be desired, chosen & considered pretty.
There was a slow reveal of the story's conflict. As it was revealed, the story got better. It started as slightly below average and, midway thru, rose to average. The narrator played a big part in the improvement. It's largely another story of love thru sex. But it was not insta-love, and they spent time sharing their life stories and confidences to a degree. So beginners' love seemed plausible. There's a nice surprise that I shoulda seen coming but didn't. And the ending was feasible as well.
Even w/ an escort as a main character, the tale isn't all sex nor gratuitous sex, but there's still enough sex thrown in. And some of it is very sexy w/ a degree of romance.