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I'm only chapter 8 of the 24 but this is hot. Recently got into gay erotica and well, this definitely made a mark even though I'm not half way through. I love hearing about how, while he grabbed (man's) cock, he saw the shining sweat droplets on his body and could smell that enticing musky scent that only comes from a man. It kinda embraces people who find any certain type of working man attractive thus far. construction men? Yup! Electricians? Yup! Plumbers? Yup! Accountants? Yup!
If you'd like to know about the narrator, for the most part, I felt he did really well. his voice is deeper and totally fits for majority of the parts. a voice that does it for me, that is for sure.
Overall/tl;dr: I love it and I'm not even finished.
I'm a hetero female, but I love M/M/ erotica. But none of these several stories worked for me. It's hard for me to put my finger on it. But I think it was that it detailed more (i.e his abs, his pits, his sweat, his lips, etc.) than it gave action. The action was rushed through with a grunt. All the words were used to describe things not explicit to the act. And it does nothing for me descriptions of pits and body smells. But to each its own. So this might work you. It this type of writing is for you, then have at it.
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